Wednesday, 21 September 2016

Narrative Writing

Walt: write a narrativeWalt: use and write paragraphs, detailed sentences, juicy words, full 

Once upon a time on a sunny morning a small family who lived in a small house was playing outside on the lake when their mum decided.They could go kayaking so they all got into their swimming togs and went outside onto their kayaking boat  but first they put on their life jackets when they got into the kayaking boat  they started to paddle and paddle then they felt something weird on the bottom of the kayaking boat it felt like someone was knocking on a door but louder so they looked down and they saw something long and green. So he told his mum it could be a crocodile.
So they paddle faster and faster untill they got tired when they looked back they saw it again so they went as fast as they could.
             THE END

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