Wednesday, 21 September 2016

Narrative Writing

Walt: write a narrativeWalt: use and write paragraphs, detailed sentences, juicy words, full 

Once upon a time on a sunny morning a small family who lived in a small house was playing outside on the lake when their mum decided.They could go kayaking so they all got into their swimming togs and went outside onto their kayaking boat  but first they put on their life jackets when they got into the kayaking boat  they started to paddle and paddle then they felt something weird on the bottom of the kayaking boat it felt like someone was knocking on a door but louder so they looked down and they saw something long and green. So he told his mum it could be a crocodile.
So they paddle faster and faster untill they got tired when they looked back they saw it again so they went as fast as they could.
             THE END

Monday, 5 September 2016

Saane Wheelbarrow Race

PES Olympics Wheelbarrow Race!
WALT: write an interesting recount by writing about our feelings and the feelings of others.
WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.

On Tuesday the 30th of August Room 9 went to the Breeze for the Wheelbarrow race I felt excited  because i didn't know what was going to happen when we got to the Breeze Room 9 sat down on the side of the Breeze and we waited for Mr Baxendine to tell us what to do.
I felt a little bit angry because Mr Baxendine had a wheelbarrow and Room 9 had to use their hands and it was not fair because the person on the. Wheelbarrow was going faster than us when I first got on my hands on the floor and Mr Baxendine said goo Petesa just dropped  me.  

It was cheating because Mr Baxendine had a Wheelbarrow and all of the girls did not we all used our hands and it was hard to do it straight i felt Weak because when Petesa holded my legs it already felt like I was going to fall.
I felt happy and excited that we had done the Wheelbarrow race it was so fun

Thursday, 1 September 2016


I have been reading about Mustelids and I made a presentation to tell you them. I think they are bad because they eat our birds and their eggs.