Friday, 10 June 2016
Wednesday, 8 June 2016
Friday, 3 June 2016
Saane Narrative - Will He Save Her
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It was a dark night and a woman was working at the shop her name was Emily it was about 8:o clock and Emily was closing the shop.Suddenly a joker came and pushed Emily into a deep lake Superman was walking past the shop and he heard a woman shouting HELP HElP Superman jumped into the lake and grabbed the lady and saved her she said thank you Superman and Superman said it’s ok if something wrong happens to you again you can tell me said Superman. Ok said Emily
What happened said Superman i was just going to close the shop but then someone pushed me into the deep lake did you see who it was said Superman
I only saw the face and it was smiling at me with lipstick around it’s lip’s Joker Superman said thank you for telling me who it was no thank you said EmilyThe End
Tuesday, 10 May 2016
Superhero Speech Marks
Superman said, “To Captain America “if you lose i get use your money,” then Captain America said no if you lose i get to borough your cap so they played chess and Superman won so than Superman spend Captain America’s money. The end
Monday, 9 May 2016
Speech Marks.
Today Mr Baxendine how to use speech marks so this is what Room 9 had to do
1. put speech marks before and after the exact words spoken by someone.#
2. put a comma (or a ?, .) between the speech marks and the words that tell you who is talking
3.Always start the first word in the speech marks with a capital letter .
Monday, 7 March 2016
Gopher Narrative Writing
In a warm sunny afternoon there was a fat chubby and slow Gopher his name was Tommy he was so hungry that he saw a sign that had a tomato on it. Well he was still looking at the sign a big blue truck. Came with some vegetables at the back in a big box.
Tommy made a big hole that the truck nearly crashed. but he was so lucky because he had one lucky carrot. he was so excited to eat the carrot but Tommy was to late a animal robber came and stole Tommy’s carrot.
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Thursday, 3 March 2016
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