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Friday, 3 June 2016

Saane Narrative - Will He Save Her

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It was a dark night and a woman was working at the shop  her name was Emily it was about 8:o clock and Emily was closing the shop.Suddenly a joker came and pushed Emily into a deep lake Superman was walking  past the shop and he heard a woman shouting HELP HElP Superman jumped into the lake and grabbed the lady and saved her she said thank you  Superman and Superman said it’s ok if something wrong happens to you again you can tell me said Superman. Ok said Emily
What happened said Superman i was just going to close the shop but then someone pushed me into the deep lake did you see who it was said Superman
I only saw the face and it was smiling at me with lipstick around it’s lip’s Joker  Superman said  thank you for telling me who it was no thank you said Emily
The End

Tuesday, 10 May 2016

Superhero Speech Marks



Superman said, “To Captain America “if you lose i get use your money,” then Captain America said no if you lose i get to borough your cap so they played chess and Superman won so than  Superman spend Captain America’s money. The end

Monday, 9 May 2016

Speech Marks.



Today Mr Baxendine how to use speech marks so this is what Room 9 had to do 
1. put speech marks before and after the exact words spoken by someone.#

2. put a comma (or a ?, .) between the speech marks and the words that tell you who is talking 

3.Always start the first word in the speech marks with a capital letter . 






Monday, 7 March 2016

Gopher Narrative Writing

In a warm sunny afternoon there was a fat chubby and slow Gopher his name was Tommy he was so hungry that he saw a sign that had a tomato on it. Well he was still looking at the sign a big blue truck. Came with some vegetables at the back in a big box.

Tommy made a big hole that the truck nearly crashed. but he was so lucky because he had one lucky carrot. he was so excited to eat the carrot but Tommy was to late a animal robber came and stole Tommy’s carrot.